Jason Better’s Copywriting Tips…
Friday Morning. I can’t believe it. Sometimes it feels like the whole week disappears in a blur. You ever feel like that too? I mean, especially if you spend a lot of time writing copy. Which almost everybody who markets online does.
So today, before I take a blogging break for the weekend, I’d like to share a few of my favorite copywriting “secrets”. And after you read these, I was hoping you could share one of your own “secrets” in a comment below. I’d really appreciate it. ![]()
Here’s three copywriting tips to get started…
Pick a great subject. Forget about your writing skills. If you can’t pick a topic your readers want to read about then all the writing in the world won’t help you one bit. Copywriting is more about what you’re selling and who you’re selling it too than it is about poetry.
Tell a wicked story. If there’s one master skill for copywriters it’s storytelling. It’s almost subliminal but if you look into the history of copy that sells you’ll see that some of the world’s most profitable ads were little more than stories.
Tone it up or down. This is probably the hardest thing you’ll ever have to master in copywriting. Writing like you speak. Writing in a conversational style that your readers can identify with. There’s nothing more difficult. At least for me.
But you know, even if you master subject, story, and tone there’s one simple principle that will help you write better copy right this instant if you take it seriously.
And you’re not gonna believe this, because it’s so brain dead simple it’s ignored by ninety-nine percent of marketers.
“Make your copy easy to read.”
I know that’s a little basic, but most people have no idea how important this is. Think about it. What does it matter what you say… if nobody ever reads it?
So here’s a few tips…
• Use contractions
• Use abbreviations
• Use short sentences
Use Subheads
• Use short paragraphs
• Use the ellipsis [...]
• “Use quotes”
• (Use parentheses)
• Use bolding and italics
• Use underlining
• Use dialog
• Use bullet points
• Use numbers [1,2,3...]
• Use lists
In short, do everything and anything you can to make your writing brain dead easy to read. Put the ten dollar words in the bank and write to the little child that lives inside us all.
The average person isn’t an English teacher. So don’t share this with miss “Pilgrim”. She’d have my head. But in general you want to write for results instead of grades.
Above all…
• Write like you speak
• Write to a friend (like you)
• Read it out loud
Then get someone else to read it to you too.
Forget the magic pills.
You can forget about Neuro-Linguistic Programming, Hypnosis, and whatever magic voodoo is popular right now. Copywriting isn’t about tricking your readers into doing your bidding. It’s about finding out what they want and helping them get it. That’s all.
To sum it all up…
“Put yourself in your reader’s shoes and walk a mile.”
With that said, it’s one of the hardest things you’ll ever do in your entire life. Identifying with your prospects. Knowing them better than they know themselves is almost impossible. But in copywriting and marketing… that’s your job.
And while that’s the best advice I have about copywriting… I’d really appreciate if you shared a brief tip of your own in a comment below. I bet you’ve picked up a few over the years.
Talk soon,
Jason The “Better Networker”
P.S. Out of ideas? I was reading the forums at Better Networker last night and one guy dropped a bomb of a tip. He said, turn off your computer monitor and type blind. Edit later.
Forget his name, but that’s tip rocks. You can share your own tip in a comment below if you wish. Much appreciated.
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Mitcehll Dillman on November 13th, 2009
Many thanks Jason,
Lately I struggle with this very topic. It’s your bloggers mojo at work again…
I’ll work on all of these tips especially the sub-heads, quotes, paras, etc.
Hey, I just posted a cute(light-hearted) article I’d like you to take a look at over at BM. Look for “Sing like a canary, Cluck like a…” Give me your feedback, I respect your advice.
Go have some fun this weekend. My wife and I are headed to Las Vegas, A BIG week ahead! Maybe we’ll see you there?
Your Friend and ‘Foggy Blogger’
Mitchell Dillman
Eco Warrior
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Jason Reply:
November 13th, 2009 at 2:32 pm
@Mitchell,
Way to go Vegas. Hope you have
great weekend Mitchell. BM?
Did you mean BN? Hmmm…
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Andy D'Silva on November 13th, 2009
If using Word you can turn on the Flesch-Kincaid reading level tool. Use it as a Guide. You want to be writing at below Grade 9 level. Sad but true and it helps keep the $10 words in your pocket.
How to turn it on?
1. Tools>Options> Spelling & Grammer
2. Check: show readability statistics> OK
To Use:
1. Run Spell check
2. Summary window will indicate the level.
Now you have a reason to use Spell Check!
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Jason Reply:
November 13th, 2009 at 2:30 pm
@Andy,
Hey Andy, that’s a really cool tip. I think
a lot of people could benefits from that one.
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Hani on November 13th, 2009
Thanks Jason..these are great tips. I always found copy writing a bit challenging for me. One tip I’d like to share with the group is to use video to complement your writing. I find it easier to fire up the camera and just talk. The words come out more naturally and more sincere.
A picture is worth a thousand words, video is around 30 pictures per second, so you do the math…that’s why I find video as an effective marketing tool
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Jason Reply:
November 13th, 2009 at 2:34 pm
@Hani
Way cool tip. I think a big problem
people have with writing is the feel like
they have to impress. I think even if they
filmed a video and got it transcribed they’d
see a huge improvement in their writing.
It’s a conversation after all, right?
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Dave Marsh on November 13th, 2009
Great insights, Jason. While I feel I’m a great communicator, my background is in technical writing, and conversational writing doesn’t come naturally to me. I will, oops, I mean I’ll, keep these things in mind as I begin my blogging/article writing/forum contributing adventures.
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Jason Reply:
November 15th, 2009 at 10:02 am
@Dave
Hey Dave. That probably gives you a huge
advantage over some people. What really
helps me when I struggle is a cheap tape
recorder… yes… I said tape recorder not
mp3.
But it helps me think and then I speak and
transcribe the tougher parts out.
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Angelica Ried on November 14th, 2009
Jason, I really like your tips and the ones added in the comments. I like to use the “Spell” and “Grammar” check in Word but I’ll make sure to use the Flesch-Kincaid too.
I like writing non stop for 20 minutes without looking back. I don’t turn the screen off but rarely correct anything. Sometimes I get three blog posts worth and sometimes barely one.
I really like writing but I need inspiration too. I find it reading and learning from other leaders like you and valuable people in Better Networker. Copywriting is one thing I’m paying more attention to lately. THANKS for great information.
Angelica
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Jason Reply:
November 15th, 2009 at 10:06 am
@Angelica
Hey, thanks Angelica. I write everything
in Notepad or TextEdit. I guess I’m a little
low-tech on that end but I find it keeps me
on track without distractions like the little
paperclick helper guy.
But now that I’m hearing about all the little
helpful things like the Flesch-Kincaid test…
Well, I might just have to convert.
Thank you for commenting too. I think you’re
making a great decision by paying a little
extra attention to copywriting… it helps
almost every aspect of marketing.
Especially online.
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Peter Montgomery on November 17th, 2009
I’m writing my first long sales letter at the moment.
I’m using Dan Kennedy’s The Ultimate Sales Letter to guide me and comparing my results to other “Famous” sales letters to see how it stacks up.
I saw a video of Mike Dillard once recommending it as a good book to start with so I bought it that night
(along with Social Media Marketing An Hour A Day by Dave Evans. Not a sales copy book though it’s a great one none the less.)
The letter is for my independent xerox repair business Home page.
In a nutshell this letter will reveal how I will revolutionize the way my customers service their machines.
A brand new concept for them to get their head around.
(And Pay For)
They’ve been buying my services for the last 4 years so they Know me Trust me and Like me.
Selling the new concept is the purpose of the letter.
Paying far Less and getting tons More value just like we do in MLM TF2 is the purpose of the concept.
I’ll be able to market this Globally and not just locally.
(Gets me off the road and in the Marketing Biz full time
I know my customers needs intimately because they’ve been describing them to me on the phone for 4 years, and 6+ years before that when I worked for Xerox.
I guess my tip is to really know what your market wants by listening to what your market wants, write it down in a proven structured way then deliver it 10 fold and then some,
Write your copy as if you’re talking to one person so they FEEL you are TALKING to them personally as they read it.
A long comment about a long sales letter.
All written with one finger and a baby on my lap.
Hope this helps.
Pete
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Jason Reply:
November 17th, 2009 at 8:34 am
Hey Peter,
I think everybody should read your comment. So I took
your tip and quoted it here:
“I guess my tip is to really know what your market wants
by listening to what your market wants, write it down in a
proven structured way then deliver it 10 fold and then some,”
That is some solid advice. And it’s the heart of all great
copywriting. I think if everyone only takes away one
tip from these comments this should be the one.
Thanks Peter. Your tip rocks.
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Peter Montgomery on November 17th, 2009
Thanks heaps Jase,
That made my day.
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Jason Reply:
November 18th, 2009 at 8:00 am
No prob.
Thank you for leaving a solid
tip. Much appreciated.
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Judd Parco on November 26th, 2009
I have a couple things that I like to do when I have writer’s block:
1. Speak It! I record what I say with Audacity (a free recording software) and just keep saying whatever comes to mind.
It’s so much easier because you are literally “speaking your mind.”
2. Dictate It! Macspeech Dictate is a voice-to-text software where you speak into a microphone and it types for you!
Although it’s not 100% foolproof, it does get your mental juices flowing if your fingers are frozen.
3. Record It! Just turn on your webcam and record whatever you feel like and then watch it again and reflect on what you said and improve it!
=]
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Jason Reply:
November 26th, 2009 at 11:20 pm
I think you’re on a roll
with comments Judd… but
very cool of you to leave your
tips.
Thanks man. I think a lot
of people will benefit from your
tips… you could almost call them
“mini articles”
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Mitchell Dillman on November 27th, 2009
Ahh #%^$ Jason,
Hang on while I quietly explode inside…
You remember I just recently got my first computer and although I’m learning faster than a cheetah on a gazelle, I just lost a 3 hour story that would’ve perhaps won a pulitzer prize.
This thing was hands down the best piece I’ve ever written…And heck, I spent 6 years in college writing everything from local news, to thesis papers, how-to books and children’s stories to the bathroom wall.
I’ve spent the majority of my years and certainly my entire adult life building beautiful custom homes and I’ve always gone way beyond even reasonable levels of quality.
I just spilled my heart into this thing, hit submit and whammo, gone like a thief in the night.
What kills me about what I’ve just done is that it’s not the first time I’ve done this and when you ignore learning from your mistakes you basically condemn yourself to failure.
I will seek wisdom and I will never again start to post a seemingly insignificant blog over at myspace, get inspired and continue to write a story without stopping. I will take my inspiration over to the proper platform, write it out then copy and paste it over.
The only thing I can say is it’s within me to write it again and better…It just breaks my heart though. Kinda like getting kicked in the chest by an old mule.
I realize it’s my lack of experience with this new tool. My life has been spent with tools heck, I’ve got over $30,000 worth of tools out in the shop and at 45 I find myself learning to use this one that, quiet honestly, I must master quickly. My livelihood depends on it.
Alright, that’s enough, I’m done. Now I will proceed to bed and begin anew tomorrow. My story can wait. It was, most likely, just not meant to happen yet. You guys aren’t ready for it.
Go check out my new video, I worked all day and loved it. You’ll see, I’m climbing to the top. I will learn.
Thanks for this outlet and sorry everyone, for my tantrum.
Your broken freind,
Mitchell Dillman
Eco Warrior
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Jason Reply:
November 27th, 2009 at 9:28 am
Ouch!
We’ve all done that… gosh.
I remember losing 3 months of
files my first month in business…
it almost put me under.
You’re not alone. Technology is a
wonderful thing and I have to keep
reminding myself that computers don’t
make mistakes… people do.
I think I’m in denial. But you know
Mitchell… it will be better when you
write it again.
Consider it practice… now you already
know what to say.
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This is a nicely expanded version of the philosophy and ideas I utilize and present, myself.
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November 13th, 2009 at 2:33 pm
@J.J. Fraser
Hey, glad we’re on the same page.
Very cool.
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